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Evander & Edits: You Know, Like Dungeons & Dragons



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Sun May 27, 2018 11:50 pm
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Evander says...



Okay, I updated my original post to reflect a new change xD

@elysian - I finished your reviews!

@GodfreysBouillon - I'm really only free to review the first chapter right now, but feel free to resubmit the other ones at a later date!
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Mon May 28, 2018 12:03 am
GodfreysBouillon says...



Alright! But its rough, remember that.
  





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Wed Jun 06, 2018 2:22 pm
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I'm not satisfied with the reviews I got, so I hope you can give a more in-depth one. Please review Silver and Golden Eggs [1]! :D
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Fri Jun 08, 2018 4:18 am
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@GodfreysBouillon - I finished the first chapter, but it's unlikely that I'll hit the rest. I wish you luck on your project, though!

@Lightsong - If you don't mind waiting, then you'll have a review from me in July. Life got pretty hectic.
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You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott