[Disclaimer: the reviews may be from kindness, but they will still contain constructive criticism, which may not be taken as "kindness," but it should help you to improve your writing, which is kindness.]
These reviews may come from different people, so there's not much to say here as to what we will review.
There’s always a story. It’s all stories, really. The sun coming up every day is a story. Everything’s got a story in it. Change the story, change the world. — Terry Pratchett
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