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Sat Oct 17, 2020 2:13 pm
SummerBlues says...



Hello there! It would mean a lot to me if you could review my work "The Ocean Is Not An Ocean" (Part 1)!! It is only around 3k long thank you so much :))
  





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Sat Oct 24, 2020 9:30 pm
omer says...



Hey! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link:
Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
"Change roads, change vehicles, go where you don't know where you're going."
-Abigail Docherty
  








Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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