I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Hey I'm looking for a few more reviews on my prologue before I post the first chapter. It's a long prologue, so if you have a look at it and baulk at the size and run away screaming, that's fine It also has plenty of very good, extremely good reviews already, but I'm looking for another person I can bounce ideas off of, seeing as my story tends to develop further and further as more and more people point out mistakes and I'm able to hone the story into fine shape.
I am nothing but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's or maybe like pocket candy that's just a bit too sweet.
Hey, I'd have a chapter to review if you can. You don't necessarily have to read the whole thing to review the plot, just grammar and style would be great
It's under romantic novels, Golden Wings: [url]topic70786.html[/url]
And I'm willing to trade if you need something for me to review Thank you!
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