I wrote this poem a while ago for my passed grandpa, I know it's not perfect but let me know what you think!
His smile so aged and wise,
His bright and vibrant blue eyes.
His leathery, calluse hands,
His dusty collection of rubber bands.
His refrigerator stacked full of cokes',
His witty and clever and hilarious jokes.
His wispy, silver hair.
His now empty, lonesome rocking chair.
We used to just sit and draw.
From eleven to half four.
And then we'd walk through the greeny wood.
I'd try and keep walking as long as we could,
But he told me we had to head back.
And that we did the cracked dirt track.
The sun was searing, the heat was unfair-
But as long as I was with him I just didn't care.
I knew he was sick, I'd heard Mum talking.
She had told me that's why we couldn't go walking.
I can still remember, waking up before dawn.
How the phone erupted, that early Monday morn.
Mum's eyes began to water,
Justifiably, as my grandfather's daughter.
And mine started flowing too,
And I prayed it all wasn't true.
The car ride was horrid,
Sweat and tears running from my forehead.
The reek of antiseptic brought me to my knees -
And I refused to stand despite my Mum's pleas.
What was the point in the world?
When someone you love was just taken and hurled!
I lay on the ground feeling broken and flat.
His aged smile, gone, just like that.
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