Like they used to
Our words are stale, we don't talk often
Like I want to
I don't know how to fix this problem,
I don't know what I did,
Tell me what happened, what went wrong
When I thought I knew you
Tell me what you think!
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Our words are stale, we don't talk often
Like they used to
Like I want to
These phrases, especially, reminded me of one of those popular pop songs. I think you can really add depth and in a sense personalize your poem if you describe these feelings in your own unique way. Don't be afraid to add complexity. It'll give your poem that more "poetical" touch. Such as you did with this line:what went wrong
It gives the reader room for interpretation. You have the skeleton; now just add the flesh. xP Happy versing!Our words are stale
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