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Mon Jun 13, 2005 8:43 pm
magusthemad says...



my favorite has been forgotten
and been gone a long time
heard only by people who
weaze and breath only fine wine
sticks of burning light
high up in the creamy nights sky
remind me of when i saw stars
for the very first time
the trees bend and twist
reaching for something they
can not find deep with in
the crevasse and fissures of my mind
  





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Tue Jun 14, 2005 12:09 am
Rei says...



It's interesting, but I'm not sure I understand what it's about, or how the title relates to it.
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Belloq, "Raiders of the Lost Ark"
  





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Tue Jun 14, 2005 1:29 am
magusthemad says...



i wrote it at a theater (one called theater 3) and couldnt think of a name
  








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