This is one of my very first serious poems, I would like as much feedback on this as possible... I hope you enjoy.
Realize
Realize,
shut your eyes,
this battle must be won.
Realize,
force a smile,
in the midst of a trial.
And if you have to leave,
this violent choral clash,
then you really shouldn't be here,
your hatered is very clear.
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