I thought it was good but there are a few things that were a little bit off. All of my comments have already been pointed out so I won't bother bringing them back up in detail. Basically it was just some punctuation and the whole "threw" and "through" thing. But all in all a pretty good poem.
" Can you truly love when you have never been loved to know what it feels like?"
" Art is not pencil, nor paper, nor color from crayon. It is simply the view we hold in our hands."
