The Aliens Are Coming (a haiku)

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Look, up in the sky!
The aliens are coming.
They will rule the world.
“There are many thing people have claimed can not be true and yet nearly all of them have ether been true to begin with or been made true by thous stubborn enough to ignore them.”-Scientist 666 from my 2009 NaNoWriMo novel.




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What kind of aliens are they? XD
What do you think they look like?
(I loved the Haikuu~!)
As time goes, the ice melts and flowers blossom once more.




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That's a great haiku
So I'll write this short review
I liked it a lot!
"This is a song for a scribbled out name
That my love keeps writing again and again
And again"




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Wariofart wrote:That's a great haiku
So I'll write this short review
I liked it a lot!


A haiku comment for a haiku! That's awesome! and thanks :)
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Wow I loved it very humorous I needed that laugh thank you!
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CleanGerms wrote:Wow I loved it very humorous I needed that laugh thank you!


You're welcome :mrgreen:
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I though I might as well tell you all the story behind this particular haiku.
I was riding home on the bus and I saw this guy who had a patch on the back of his jacket that looked like a old si-fi movie poster and I just had to write a haiku about it!
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Very light-hearted. I like it!
"Madness rides the Star wind"

HP Lovecraft. Ironic, no?




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This is light-hearted and cute. What I particularly like about it is that it is a good haiku in the sense that it takes a moment in time, a scene, and just tells it. It doesn't say what the writer is thinking or feeling, there are just facts. The person could be scared, excited, worried or even happy - the poem doesn't give that away and it adds a sense of mystery to the poem. I love that I can get so much out of such a short poem, and that someone has written a haiku that I can actually write a 500+ character review about! So well done. :)
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This is awesome.
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

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