Two by Two

I really enjoyed this as reading this poem through i did think at first that it was about a war soldier in the camps. But having the narrator being a pig ready for slaughter is quite clever and original IMO.
Only thing i would say is the poem doesn't really follow a solid structure and rhyme pattern. Work on that dude and would like to see you post more of this stuff.

At first it sounded like something that was based off something from a horror movie or something related wilh the Holocaust. . . . And then i realized it was about a pig.
All I've got to say is that it was odd, and very bizarre, but somehow touching.
That and I'll never have pig again.
It was bad enough when they put the picture of the baby pig next to the ham at school, but now it's official.