Imaginary

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I imagine as you move
That you do it with such grace

To defy in me
The strong conviction
That I’ve been misplaced.

I watch and you are lonely,
Held within a place you knew,

Where breath is kept in,
Ticks of toes, and beats
Gone without a trace.

As each shaky breath unleashed
No truth, but my wanting ruse.

Rattle upon me,
False ecstasy; seen,
Felt, but misconstrued.




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Welcome to YWS..:D
Your poem kinda left me speechless
Good job...
(oh and the speechless thing is a good thing just to let you know..:P)
I dare you to move
I dare you to move
I dare you to lift yourself up off the floor
I dare you to move
I dare you to move
Like today never happened
Today never happened...
Before. ---Dare you to move by, Switchfoot---




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First off, welcome to YWS! Nice having you(:
Your poem was great, perfect, really.
Nice job(: Keep up the good work.
rena;;let the future pass and don't let go




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that was really beautifull. it was defenently a pleasure to read.only nit pick is that capitalized every line is when it need not. otherwise i really enjoyed reading it.
Take on everything head first and never look back.




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Its well written written for a new member!! :)
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If you want something badly, you just gotta believe it's gonna work out.
— Andy, Parks & Rec