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Angels-Symphony · 2009-03-03T23:30:21Z

NOTE: Warning, this is another one of my fifty second poems. I wrote it while I was hungry in my room.PLEASE read it with a beat and you'll do just fine xD You know what I want? I want some string cheese! I'm awfully hungry; could you pass me some please? I broke my leg, and I got stung by some bees, so all I want is my stick of string cheese. Would low-fat be okay? No, I would not mind. Because this healthy treat cannot fatten my behind. It's cheesy, it's awesome, it's really something good. Try it! You want some? Everybody should! Delicious and delectable, tasty and quite fine. I'd give you a piece but I'm not willing to share mine!

Angels-Symphony

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Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:02 pm

Angels-Symphony says... · Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:02 pm

a poem about cheese O_O Thanks for the reviews guys

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Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:22 am

VivelaMusique says... · Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:22 am

*Huggles*

Hello, soul-sister!

I'm a fellow cheese-stick addict. And lovin' it.

Other than the above mentioned, minor things I can't find anything to change. It's completely perfect!

Seriously, my new favorite poem. I'll recite it when I'm hungry. Haha.

Great job! Very cute!

-Maggie

"Why kill time when you can kill yourself?"
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Mon May 10, 2010 10:30 am

kingolions says... · Mon May 10, 2010 10:30 am

Hey. I loved this poem. I'm sorry, but someone has to say it. This poem was kinda cheesy! But I really like t. It was creative, and not many people would thing of something that cool.

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