String Cheese

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a poem about cheese O_O Thanks for the reviews guys :P
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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*Huggles*

Hello, soul-sister! ;)

I'm a fellow cheese-stick addict. And lovin' it.

Other than the above mentioned, minor things I can't find anything to change. It's completely perfect! ;)

Seriously, my new favorite poem. I'll recite it when I'm hungry. Haha.

Great job! Very cute!

-Maggie
"Why kill time when you can kill yourself?"
-Voltaire




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Hey. I loved this poem. I'm sorry, but someone has to say it. This poem was kinda cheesy! But I really like t. It was creative, and not many people would thing of something that cool.




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good job! geez, you have a knack for making me hungry! :elephant:




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cheese makes me sick, not in any form. not even string, sorry about the bees and all that.



The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein