helloo I want to start off with: nice write! I like the imagery in this write.. You should consider making it longer though..I think it would be even better then I don't have any criticism for you nice work! -qaralynn-
"If they can't be with you at your worst, then they don't deserve to be with you at your best." -Murtuza-
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I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark. — Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X
