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ctendoh
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Sun Apr 10, 2005 1:02 am
ctendoh says... · Sun Apr 10, 2005 1:02 am
The river of my love
Flows through the canyon of my soul
Past the walls of my heart
Into yours

Hope ya like it. Just something from when I was bored in Social Studies. :twisted: :lol:
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jossymaiye
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Thu Apr 21, 2005 3:59 pm
jossymaiye says... · Thu Apr 21, 2005 3:59 pm
hmmmmmmmmmm....get more stuff.
i know you are dry
but that does`nt mean you should cry
get up and fly
fly reallly high
up to the deep blue sky
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whisperinghope
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Fri Apr 22, 2005 12:46 pm
whisperinghope says... · Fri Apr 22, 2005 12:46 pm
I really like the picture this brings to my mind. Very nice. And I think its length is just perfect.
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qaralynn
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Thu May 05, 2011 3:36 pm
qaralynn says... · Thu May 05, 2011 3:36 pm
helloo
I want to start off with: nice write! I like the imagery in this write..
You should consider making it longer though..I think it would be even better then :)
I don't have any criticism for you
nice work!
-qaralynn-
"If they can't be with you at your worst, then they don't deserve to be with you at your best."
-Murtuza-

"Even though a ship won't sink at sea, it needs to be steered to get home."
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