Dreams of Suicide

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xanthan gum
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Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:02 pm
xanthan gum says... · Fri Jul 06, 2007 9:02 pm
:) Amusing, and I liked how it showed the tie in to the backward haunting thoughts of your mind. I wish there weren't so many capitals, but the format make sense for the sake of adding an independently standing and important phrase.

Your latest poems are witty; you've found your simple style. But I'd like to see a bit more in the next effort.
Carpe Diem.
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:00 am
iQuippie says... · Thu Aug 30, 2007 3:00 am
lmao! XD you're brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
I think you're crazy, maybe.
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Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:11 pm
-Save-Ferris- says... · Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:11 pm
I agree with everything good everyone else said xD

Great work (:
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Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:00 pm
nightmask says... · Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:00 pm
I like how you made yourself seem so vulnerable. Did you really have a dream about suicide? I like how to gave the wind personification you made the poem sound even cooler by doing that. Overall it was short, but very well written :)
watch me as I float away leaving my lifeless body behind leave my wounded heart unmeneded just as you intended leave my timeless love alone you ripped out my heart and stole it but I just cried and smiled "you can keep it" I'll never love again.
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Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:53 am
Li'l EMO says... · Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:53 am
It's strange..
:S
I like it :)
The name caught my eye...
Typical emo girl :roll:
Hehe physics?
I don't get it :S
I'm not logical enough
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