Elsie's Mad Hair

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winie603
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:16 am
winie603 says... · Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:16 am
Elsie's mad hair today became a sladder patter.

With her ears and her eyes she could simply revise that her hair was madder today.

But my way is sweeter then breaking a comb it's taking a shower today I hope!
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 2:43 pm
Rydia says... · Fri Jun 01, 2007 2:43 pm
Before I can really comment you need to write a lot more...
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 4:25 pm
Teague says... · Fri Jun 01, 2007 4:25 pm
This is a poem, darling. Belongs in the poetry secton. :)

*waits for a mod to move it*
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Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:10 pm
Twit says... · Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:10 pm
This is rather confusing. Sorry. But yes, where's a mod?
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