Young Writers Society

Dream Big
Open Your
Eyes
And
See
Try
To
Touch
The
Sky
Try
To
Flow Like The Sea
Be
Happy
As a bird
Dream Big
You
Can
Do It
Don't
Be
Down
Get
Proud
Be You
I Can
Just
Dream
BIG!!!!

Is A Bird

It should have been as a bird but I just love it it is so good my favorite part was when you said.

Dream Big
Open Your
Eyes
And
See
Try
To
Touch
The
Sky
Try
To
Flow Like The Sea

I love it it was so good.

Dream Big, Open Your Eyes,
And See.
Try To Touch The Sky.
Try To Flow Like The Sea.
Be Happy As a bird.
Dream Big,
You Can Do It,
Don't Be Down.
Get Proud,
Do You You Can What does that mean?
Just Dream BIG!!!!

You have a nice poem... But that on part does not make any sense. Also cutting the lines so much made it hard to read. Nice try!

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-Boo

This poem is amazingly awesome!!

I like the poem, though it was choppy. With every word seperated it was hard to grasp the concept of the poem. I would creat a Stanza for this poem, and I know ou can amke one! Also make the sentences longer and add a rhyme to it, so it would be more intresting, you know.

One big thing for poems are punctuation. Yes, even in poems there has to be puntuations. This just seems like a long sentence that doesn't fit together that well.

Dream Big
Open Your
Eyes
And
See.

That is a sentence, well to me it sounds like one. Because of the next word after that list doesn't quite correspond to each other. You know, it'll be something like this. : Dream big, open your eyes and see try. That just doesn't sound very good next to each other. Other than that, that was the only thing that I stumbled upon. Good job, and keep working on your poems! ^^