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I know english isn't your first language, so i'll let you off. Otherwise, this is badly written. It should go more like: I always wonder what the outside world is like.polinkacreations wrote:I have always wondered what the outside world feels like now
This is unrealistic. Butterflies land on peoples' fingers in fairy lands, not generally in real life.polinkacreations wrote: a butterfly land on my finger
he's still alive - right? Then he isn't lifeless! Try something like: limp ectpolinkacreations wrote:lifeless body
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