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Day 3. Drowning most of the grief in vodka and my father’s old musty stash of surprisingly terrible wine. Come to think of it, since the fat old man never bothered with a will, I suppose I’ll take it all of his cold, dead hands. Maybe I don’t want it. After all, if I wasn’t so preoccupied with the booze in question, I might have seen the burglar slip in through the window, grab my father’s old cast iron colt from its place of honor, on a rotting wooden pedestal above the mantle place, and put a .357 mag between his eyes. And if I wasn’t so absorbed by the intoxication of said liquor, I would have pulled my own gun from its hidden holster under the table and dropped the thief dead before he could take another breathe, let alone blow two golf ball sized holes into my own sister’s forehead. The he just knocked me out and left. With everything still in its rightful place, or as far as I could tell when I woke up…
“This is FREAKING POINTLESS!!” I roared as I hurled the journal as hard as my arm would allow into the wall opposite me. I threw that journal with the intent of demolishing that cellar wall, as if demolition could ease the pain. Unsurprisingly, the cellar’s old bricks and stones refused to budge. I slid down to the floor and gave the longest, hugest, most discontented sigh of the century. You gotta start movin eventually, I thought to myself, the social workers will show up from out of nowhere. Take you to an orphanage someplace in some old suburban town you’ve never heard of. And make you go to school. I shuddered. School. Just the sound of that word brought a chill to my spine. So the old overcoat came on, a long, jet black duster that went down to my knees. Old fashioned and pretty cowboyish, but I loved it. One of the few things my old man could afford. Next, the shoes. I had these faded black, tall Chucks that I just about wore everywhere. They were stylish enough to the point where I didn’t look too poor, but athletic enough where I could go anywhere with them. Open the door went, and out came the last descendant of Flint Wesson, the gun fanatic, who had even infected his son, Collin Wesson, with the love of guns. He walked through his overgrown garden, turned left, and never looked back.
It was true what they said about us, I thought, Me and dad love guns. Well, at least one of us does and the other did. How fitting that guns kept him here on this earth, and his own trusty revolver took him off it. But he got me into them, and it’s your only hobby, and the only thing you’re good at. You can take any gun apart, put it back together, and fire it with dead-eye accuracy. And that’s why every one’s afraid. Afraid of what you could do to them with those guns you love so. That’s when your only friend became your 15 year old sister, Carla. And now, you have absolutely nothing. Well, accept the cast iron colt from the fire place mantle and 20 extra shells from the your secret stash under the cold, lumpy mattress you spent many a night pondering what it is you’re doing with your life. Sure, your only fourteen, but it’s not out of the question to just stick that cold, black barrel in your mouth and pull the trigger. Maybe- my thoughts were cut off as I walked straight into a man dressed in dusty tight brown jeans and a large black duster, not at all unlike my own. ”Look out s-” but I had not even thought of what I was going to say next before I looked up, and recognized the face. The face that will never leave my memory. It was the robber. He had a very long face, indeed, like a big brown mare, for he was darkly tanned. He had short, military cut hair, a strong jaw, and muscles that were even visible under the baggy black duster. And the eyes. The stunning, sharp, piercing blue eyes, cold as the arctic, sharper than any blade imaginable. They seemed to be looking into me and not at me, accessing my strengths and weaknesses. Then, he brought back a fist the size of the bricks in the cellar, and brought it straight into my left cheekbone, then the other fist came up, and crashed into my right, then finally a foot came up and slammed into my stomach. My world turned black and my coherent last thought before I went under was, am I hallucinating, or is there a hole opening up in the air behind him, dragging me and him into it?
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