Young Writers Society

Wow! Hi, this is the frist time I've read anything of yours I believe, and I'm already liking it! I think I should start reading more of your stuff, this is really great! I don't have anything negative to say. If you write anything else, please send me a link! I enjoyed reading this(: Best of luck!

~Forsakinshadow~

PS: 'Like'

Yes, the unicorn should've definitely specified what type of pure virgin it wanted...I found it really funny when they couldn't find any virgins in town. I liked this half of the story pretty well (haven't read the other half yet), but there are some things I'd like to mention.
And they've already been mentioned, but I really don't care. I really thought with all the allusions to how awful Mud looked that you might describe some of her. Not that I don't have a pretty good picture of her, but it seems strange that you didn't list any horrible deformities...
I probably wouldn't have noticed, really, except I caught sight of someone's review and they mentioned it. Normally I just skip over description anyway, so I don't think it's a big deal.

Damn. You are the reason people get on these sites. Great job as usual RH! But I didn't need to tell you that.

I loved this. I can just hear the tone in my head and it's lovely. Hilarious. This should be in a book I'm reading called Unicorns vs. Zombies. Have you by chance read it?

I loved your story very interesting!!! You did a great job!!!:)