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Everybody knows you can't outrun your own shadow, but I had no choice. I had to get away from the terrible darkness which clung to me. I ran until my lungs burned, but it (instead of "it", you might find it better to replace it with "the darkness", so that the "it" in your next sentence is not referring back to a noun that had been stated two sentences ago, and had already been used as the antecedent once before.)still held on. I knew it would never let go. All I could do was run.
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