comments are apprecieted!It's just something I thought of right now, so it's not complete. I don't really like the begining and I have a lot of spelling mistakes, I'll fix those later. I'm not completely happy with it, but it's just out of bordem so what the hell. enjoy!
Okay, so coming to this place was not my brightest idea, I had to admit to myself as I watched the small dancing pixies circle me, their faces taunting. They were each no bigger than one finger of mine, their pretty, bright dresses caught my eyes immediately in the darkness that surrounded, their little bodies so graceful as they moved.
It was so beautiful. Any mortal being would've traded his life happily just to continue watching this.
Not me.
"Ladies, please," I tried to chuckle, it didn't work so well. They looked a bit smug, seeing how I tried to fight the distant fog in my head that made me want to stay in my place.
My feet felt like lead. It was dark all around me, I couldn't even see the floor. I knew I should've been panicking by then, I knew that if I stayed here I would surely die. But I just couldn't care. I was only vaguely aware as a door opened in the distance, somewhere near my left, I tried to make sense of it, but I couldn't. My head was so full of the pretty dancing lights, and the darkness that circled me.
So the villagers were right about this damn cave being haunted, who knew? I thought as I felt something tug on my arm.
My head felt heavy, like my feet. Staying here would be so nice... just for a few minutes, then I'll definitely go back, the twinkling bright lights would understand, wouldn't they? Another tug, stronger this time. Voices shouting. I was too tired to make out words. I wanted to stay and watch the flickering lights, why did that annoying tug keep coming? Another yell, my eye lids felt heavy now.
The darkness kept coming, it was up to my feet now, I couldn't really feel them as the it climbed up my legs. The flickering bright lights seemed to slowly fade away. I frowned. Where did they go? They should come back! I wasn't finished watching them... My breath felt heavy now too. Maybe I should stop breathing? The thought crossed my mind. No, that would be wrong, I tried to reason with myself, but I suddenly had no reason to back up that claim. I just couldn't remember why it was so wrong that I stop breathing.
Another tug, violent this time. Leave me alone! I wanted to cry, the tug didn't let me think straight! My eye lids slipped shut and I couldn't open them. I felt a faint echo of panic ripple through me, I couldn't open my own eye lids, that was wrong. I couldn't remember why it was so wrong, so I let it falter into shallow breaths.
It felt nice just being stuck to one place like that, not hearing, not seeing, not feeling... all except the angry annoying hisses and tugs, pulling me out of the clouding calmness. Another yell. I forced my eye lids open. It made me sweat with effort. "H-help!" I managed to stutter, the panic in me felt so much clearer once I opened my eyes, everything was so blurry, the fog started disappearing slowly.
The room wasn't dark anymore. The pixies were gone, no more bright lights. I felt absurdly disappointed.
"He's waking up!" came another shout. I gritted my teeth, too annoyed to notice this action should've been extremely hard. "Stop yelling..." I hissed. I stood up straight, the feeling in my feet returning. They weren't heavy anymore. They felt sort of like jelly. I forced my eyes completely open, forced my back straight, and then forced my lips to curve into a grimace. The voices didn't quiet down. They hissed some more, nervous now.
"Okay, I get it, I get it. Now stop yelling!" I managed to put some force inside my voice, so I was shouting.
Silence. For the first time. Finally.
I shook my head; it was still heavy, unlike my feet. When I looked around the cave again, there were five people frozen to their place with their eyes all glued on me.
So I've been dreaming.
Did I yell? I tried to think of a reason for them to look at me that way, but my eyes were still blurry, I couldn't make out exact shapes. The air in the cave felt damp and salty, I didn't feel the salt when the fog took over. I had to think about the dream, I had to remember the lights before they vanished into the darkness like now. I tried to think through the dream while they unfroze gradually, their eyes still on me. I tried to ignore them, the dream seemed so real. The bright lights... The pixies... But where did that door come from? This was a cave. No doors here. I looked at the floor, my brow creasing.
Something was missing. It took me a minute to figure out what it was. I gasped. My shadow was gone. I stared at my feet dumbfounded.
There was one low voice that started echoing a murmured word through the cave, more and more panic added in every time it repeated itself. "Human...! Human!!" the figures hissed and mumbled, from the corner of my eye I could see their figures did look sort of human. It was all so strange, and my head was heavy again. What did they mean by human? What was going on?
I let my eye lids slip shut again, my feet buckled under me.
When I awoke, five hundred years had passed. Here. For the shadow world it was only five minutes. Not nearly enough time to get ready for the first human who ever set foot there.
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