I liked it alot! As I was reading it, I felt like I was slipping from one line to the next, like when you roll a bouncy ball down the stairs. Very cool.
You brought letters to life, that's for sure. I think there's a lot of places you could've taken this, it's very creative.
I enjoyed the simple ending. The only thing I didn't like too much was the spacing, and how you kind of commented once or twice on the story as you told it.
But that's just me making myself find something to critique.
It was pretty sweet.
Keep up the good work.
This was wonderful! I love this! The idea of letters and pictures coming alive and trading places. Who would have though that the letters that make up our stories were so unhappy?
The way you gave each letter characteristics was amazing! The 'S's were my favourite. I also like how the 'G's were helping the 'O's again.
I can't find anything bad to say about this! It was so creative and the imagery was excellent.
Good job!
Happy Writing
Meadow
Purple light in the canyon that is where I long to be With my three good companions just my rifle, pony and me --- "My Rifle My Pony and Me"
When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings. — Dean Jackson
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