Hi everyone! Thank you all sooo much for reviewing my story! You helped me out a ton and my story is now (hopefully) better than when I started out with it! Thanks again!
~Tayla
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I guess this story was pretty good, but it seemed a bit rushed to me. The descriptions was okay but needed a bit more work, in my opinion. The setting was great, and the characterization was interesting, to say the least. My main problem was the dragon though. Talking dragons are too cliched for me, but other than that, nice job there.
Such beautiful and magneficent power of the words. Your wizardry in this piece has drawn me to it and I embrace it. Your wizardry in this piece calls all dragon-lovers to it. Such a combination of Eragon, The Fire Within, and Dragons of Deltora is blended into a divine piece such as this one. Keep writing for the sake of writing and other writers would praise your works the same way I did.
Look down and show some mercy if you can. Look down, look down, upon your fellow man.
I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin. — David Eddings
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