Nightsong

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Wow, this is really good. I'm not really sure if my opinion counts because I haven't written much, but this is really good. You should definitely finish it, I love it. I don't really get how the first little paragraph about the night blends into the Sira story other that that it's nighttime but I suppose you will get to that later in the story. Keep writing!



For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle