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The Life and Times of Miss Aurora Beaumont (and friends)
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Seraphim
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Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:33 pm
Seraphim
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Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:33 pm
I really like this and it has a nice twist.
However it was a little confusing at times and the attachable re-tachable wing I'm not feeling it that well but you're the writer
this is great please continue.
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