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Portrait in Twilight: The Butterfly



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Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:17 am
Dream Deep says...



I'm in your debt, Rieda - thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. This thread's been dormant a long time and it was nice to hear a new opinion.

I appreciate it greatly. ^_^
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Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:57 am
beyond.the.horizon says...



That was beautiful! Nice imagery. I got this pleasantly tingly feeling while reading it, and everything was all glittery in my head while reading it. You did a great job of pulling magic into the story of creation.

Kudos!
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Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:58 am
Dream Deep says...



Merci beaucoup. ^_^

A pleasure, of course - I'm glad you enjoyed it, Horizon.
  








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