October 15th, 2010 Update: I've taken down the old version and posted the new and improved variant. So, if anyone is reading it right now, I'd be super-super appreciative if you read the new one instead, since a lot has been altered and overall it's just way more polished. Also, if you do intend to read it, I'd really love if you NOT read what other reviewers have posted until you get past the first ten pages, for the sole reason of there being kind of an early "twist" that I personally think is essential to the execution of the story (at least in the beginning). Thanks guys!
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Hey there, I originally posted this in the chapters forum, not realizing this one even existed, so I re-posted it here. The novel/novella (it's borderline) is about 125 pages long, so obviously I don't expect you all to read the entire thing. Hopefully though it's good enough to keep one or two of you intrigued. Have fun and please feel free to give any thoughts and criticisms you have. Keep in mind I am still heavily polishing the actual writing, however the story itself is essentially complete. I really need some subjective point of views.
Without giving too much away, the story is sort of an Existential-Crime-Horror-Noir. It deals with a secret society of high-end criminals living behind the scenes of an unnamed city. Beyond their criminal exploits, they have all have a dark and twisted past that sort of binds them together. There's no "good guys vs bad guys" here. Everyone's both good and bad for the most part (though some are certainly worse than others).
WARNING: This story contains coarse language, graphic violence and sexuality, and some very adult themes. It's not for the faint of heart and is most certainly only for mature readers. You know who you are (hopefully).
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