The first volume of the Key to the Worlds quartet, a novel in three parts.
It's YA fantasy, with some steampunk elements.
The vibrant city of Compiteum has been permanently linked to three other worlds, forming a colorful hodgepodge in which one street might contain the zeppelins and iron towers of Compiteum, the next the briar and forests of Feras, the red-light district of Zerbroch, or the delicate temples of Tiandra. The linking could not have been accomplished without the intrepid leadership of Dr. Elise Kingruey--unfortunately, she hasn't lived to see the fruits of her labor, because the process of opening the door to other worlds killed her. Dr. Kingruey is survived by her daughter Evanna, now fourteen. A closed and lonely girl, Evanna loves nothing but the memory of her dead mother and resents the accolades that she receives for simply being Elise's daughter. Everything changes when she's attacked by a mysterious monster when she accidentally wanders into a section of Zerbroch. A strange woman comes to her rescue and shocks Evanna when she reveals that not only did she know Elise, but she believes that foul play, not an accident, was involved in Elise's death. Now, with the knowledge that her mother was murdered, Evanna decides to join the woman Natalia and her Institute in a quest to find her mother's killers. Little does she know that her investigation will lead her to discover not just the truth about Elise's murder, but the insidious secrets hidden inside the linked worlds--and herself.
This is my NaNo '09. I've gone through and edited it once already, and in the case of the first part, edited it twice.
The first part titled BOOK ONE: THE INSTITUTE is available for download. It's approximately 30,000 words long and the chapters are enormous. Just a warning. Feel free to upload your critiques in parts.
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