Hey guys ^_^
I've never posted anything in advanced critiques before, so I thought I'd give it a go! This is a pretty short novella. It's humorous fiction, (Well, supposed to be anyway) I'll let you be the judge of that!
It's a pretty rough draft to be honest. Knowing me, there are probably loads of mistakes in it. I was thinking of making it a bit longer, but I wanted to know if you think it has any potential whatsoever?
Thanks,
xoxo Skins
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