Hello This is my first attempt at a novel. It is the completed first draft of my NaNo. And I would love to get a proof copy before May so I need to edit. I'd also love to hear if you enjoy this and think it would be interesting for readers. Here is a quick summary:
After her mother's death Alyce Averyson is thrown into a world full of death and hate. The only people she can trust are her cousin Sophia and a mysterious boy named Ash. But when she witnesses a death that comes true it only means there are more to come. She is tossed into a battle between life and death that has been going on for decades. With the help of her mother, a woman called the Vision and Ash will she be able to stop the deaths before the light fades from another innocent person?
Thanks in advance for critiques and advice.
(I'll be happy to donate some points if you review this since I know it'll take time)
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