Hi everyone,
this rough draft for a dystopian future novel is now READY!! WHOHOOO!
It's 3/4 ready. Well, 2/3 anyway
CONTENT WARNING - VERY VERY ADULT, DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE NOT AN ADULT, IT WILL MESS YOU UP
That being said, I hope I manage to spin a tale which is not drowned out by some of the episodes. Now, please no grammar feedback, this is a rough draft, just give me please your general opinion. Are the characters done well. Is the setting done well. Is there suspence, is there disgust, is there hope of resolution, are the concepts credible?
Thanks
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