The back of the book would look a lil' something like this...
“Dark Angels and Demon Kings. What’s next?!
Late 2009. Lucia and her little brother, Elijah, have become accustomed to living average everyday lives. Their “guardians,” aunt Harah and the wolf-loving Alex have always provided them with the best that mortal money could buy. A spacious house. Nice clothes. A good life. Calm, unobtrusive, happy…
But this family has a secret.
Unbeknownst to Eli, they’re all former-residents of an underground society known as Lower Town—a community of humans (among other things) with supernatural abilities… and they’re all pretty badass about it.
Why’d they leave? Because two of Lower Town’s most powerful Players have been murdered, a Demon King resurrected, Dark Angels are on the prowl, and both their world and the Surface world are unraveling at the seams. So they’ve resorted to the awfully human strategy of running for their lives…
Are you ready for a wild ride?
Cause after you read this book… you’ll never look at "the streets" the same again.
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Do note that this is Book One of (tentative) Five. (Don't worry, that doesn't mean you have to read them all. Some would consider the First Book [chapters 1 through 7] to have funny formatting. I promise to fix that for the next one!)
Back-story: So I joined YWS at the beginning of summer to submit my "prologue" for this novel to the awesome reviewers I found here. After receiving a lot of advice, I retired from YWS for the rest of the summer, intent on completing this first book. In the end, I got nearly 100,000 words, 260 pages... I even amaze myself sometimes. Now I'm back, and ready to take the community by storm! Bwuahahahaha!
Stats:
- 7 Chapters (pro!)
- 252 Pages
- Approx. 90,222 Words
- Approx. 506,118 Characters
- Rating: Due to the bad language and semi-vivid/bloody fight scenes, I am required to rate this R. We're surrounded by bad language and bloody tv shows, so it mine shouldn't be that bad. Nothing sexual or anything like that involved here, though .
Since it's only 1 attachment per post, I'll have to triple post (2MB limit )
Update: Updated the other chapters with TedusCloud's revisions.
Update: Updated the other chapters chapter with Karsten's revisions.
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Update: Updated the other chapters chapter with Audy's revisions.
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