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Tue Aug 25, 2009 2:39 am
ZakkuAlpha says...



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Tue Sep 01, 2009 1:24 am
KayKel16 says...



Even though this is long, I'll review it. Okay? It'll take me awhile, no more than three days. Can you wait that long? If so, I'll definitely review this! I'll start right now :P

Edit: Okay, I just finished this today. I found it really interesting. My review consists of grammar, punctuation, spelling, and confusion information (Where I find parts which are confusing for the reader.) It's all located on the right side, in a nice and orderly form :]


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