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Sun Dec 14, 2008 6:05 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Uh yeah I got a question: why is my post locked? I didn't do that. Is that something that randomly happens for some reason?
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Sun Dec 14, 2008 6:27 am
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See this: topic40120.html
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Sun Dec 14, 2008 11:54 pm
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So even if you have a 4000 word chapter, you're supposed to post it in the other forums and expect people to be willing to critique it. You can only post a full sized novel here, and you have to post it finished, all together? Is that the gist of it?
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Sun Dec 14, 2008 11:59 pm
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Yes, this area is only for full novels. If your chapters are large and you don't think people will read them in the other forum then post them in parts. Like Chapter one, part one and Chapter one, part two. But generally, that shouldn't be necessary. If the story is interesting, people will read them despite the length.
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:14 pm
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Isn't it unfair for the people that go to all the work of critiquing the whole novel on Microsoft Word but put it on a download document. They only get like 12 points even though they've critiqued the whole thing because the actual message on the forum isn't long enough. So they're expected to write a large-ish message on the forum AND critique the entire thing? :lol:

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Mon Dec 22, 2008 5:18 pm
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Well generally people receiving an advanced critique will give extra points out or reviews in exchange. But the base idea of this forum, is a review for a review. Those who post their work in it, review another's.
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:43 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Aw; I get it now Kitty, ta ;)
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Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:38 pm
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Ok; I posted a chapter of my novel, but it's 8071 words long and no one's reviewing it because of that :lol: can I post it here instead? I know you're only meant to post stories here but mine is very long :(
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Wed Dec 24, 2008 10:29 pm
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Nope; I would recommend breaking the chapter in to segments and posting them that way -- then it'll be shorter and easier to read.
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:10 am
Maki-Chan says...



Can we post Fanfiction. If its a novel?
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:41 pm
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Lost_in_dreamland wrote:Isn't it unfair for the people that go to all the work of critiquing the whole novel on Microsoft Word but put it on a download document. They only get like 12 points even though they've critiqued the whole thing because the actual message on the forum isn't long enough. So they're expected to write a large-ish message on the forum AND critique the entire thing? :lol:

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Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:01 pm
Sureal says...



Maki-Chan wrote:Can we post Fanfiction. If its a novel?


Can't imagine why not. Make sure you mention what it's a fan fiction of, though.
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Thu Jan 15, 2009 5:08 am
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This may be a stupid question and I don't know if this concern is anywhere else because I could not find it, but I tried to place an attached filed onto my post and it says I need to have it as a .doc. The problem here is that I do not have any program or anything to make a .doc file. All I have is the wordpad that comes with my computer and normally I save as rtf but the site won't accept that as an attached file. Am I SOL on this one or what?
  





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:14 am
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My question is,,, If I write a novel chapter by chapter and post it in the other forums, is it ok when I'm finished I put it in here?
  





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 12:52 am
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Arri: You could download a simple word processor that would save the document in that format, I think Open Office has the option though I'm not certain or you could possibly use a school/ college/ university computer? Failing that, possibly one at your local library? Most would have microsoft word.

Aoaystheory: Yes, that would be fine.
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