Hey guys! I've been posting this novel in the forum, but here's the full version, if any of you are interested in reading it. Any comments or edits are appreciated.
I'll definitely try to look over this and give you some overarching comments on theme and characterization (as those are my main critiques with novels, I feel.) That said, I wanna give a little nod to those who want to click the link and make sure you guys use fake names on Google! We want you to stay as safe as possible!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon
I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
here is the deepest secret nobody knows
(here is the root of the root
and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky
of a treee called life; which grows higher than the soul can home
or mind can hide)
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart
(i carry it in my heart) — e.e. cummings
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