Hey guys! I've been posting this novel in the forum, but here's the full version, if any of you are interested in reading it. Any comments or edits are appreciated.
I'll definitely try to look over this and give you some overarching comments on theme and characterization (as those are my main critiques with novels, I feel.) That said, I wanna give a little nod to those who want to click the link and make sure you guys use fake names on Google! We want you to stay as safe as possible!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon
I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy. — Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
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