Hey guys! I've been posting this novel in the forum, but here's the full version, if any of you are interested in reading it. Any comments or edits are appreciated.
I'll definitely try to look over this and give you some overarching comments on theme and characterization (as those are my main critiques with novels, I feel.) That said, I wanna give a little nod to those who want to click the link and make sure you guys use fake names on Google! We want you to stay as safe as possible!
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much as I will drown everything you have inside.
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What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though. — J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye
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