I've been trying to think of something good to write as my first story and I think I've finally found it. Please tell me what you think.
The idea is that the main character (who's name is undecided still) will start from almost having nothing in his/her life and progress to become the greatest in the universe. The main character will meet many people, learn valuable things, how to act, what friendship is, the value of people and nature, and controlling anger. The main source of power the main character will obtain will be element style. Similar to how The Last Airbender cartoon is, it will feature the many fighting aspects of it. I also used to play World of Warcraft so I'm going to use some stuff for ideas towards it too. The time era the story uses will have it's own, so it will start at 100 for example. The age of the main character will start from 14 - 17. There will be gods as well, but not overly powerful. If I was an artist I would sketch an outlook of the universe but I can't draw for my life. It'll start as a "perfect" universe that's beautiful and peaceful. Later it will progress to burning dark times, hopefully to restore itself. The whole objective of the story is for the main character to learn who he/she is, their past, how to feel, control their emotions, and to be able to use their energy for everything. There will be some comedy (15-20%) added to it and red herrings + motifs as well.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated or opinions!
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