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Sat Apr 28, 2012 4:05 pm
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babymagic18 says...



I have finally made it to my final draft and it's slow going but I guess that's to be expected when I can't allow myself to miss things in it. I have to practice work on putting the senses in my writing. I have a lot of touch but I need the others too. Good thing I caught that now and not when it was too late, phew!
  








In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien