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Sat Apr 28, 2012 4:05 pm
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babymagic18 says...



I have finally made it to my final draft and it's slow going but I guess that's to be expected when I can't allow myself to miss things in it. I have to practice work on putting the senses in my writing. I have a lot of touch but I need the others too. Good thing I caught that now and not when it was too late, phew!
  








Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners