I wrote the prologue to this new story called "The Dead Boys" and I'm wondering if it sounds good enough that I should continue on with it. It's about a gang of boys that were once called the "youngest and deadliest gang in Georgia." Five of the boys were shot by policemen and were supposedly killed. Actually they were turned into Soul-Stealing vampires. (Vampires that stay alive by stealing human souls instead of drinking blood.) Sixteen years after the night of their death, the boys get revenge by killing the policemen that ended their human lives.
Should I continue writing this one? Or should I just let this one die? I would appreciate any advice you guys could give me.
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