Alright, so I am currently writing a story. Well actually, I've finished it and am at the editing phase. 167 pages guys and I still have to add more things, I'm hoping that it will be big! But this isn't what I am here for; I need your help YWS and advice.
I've been having trouble with my beginning. To me, it just sounds so cliche and I end up getting so frustrated I ignore it for a couple of days. It's written like that of a diary, except without the dates at the top. It's an urban fantasy, just so you know. My beginning starts off with the main character saying her regrets and what she wishes happened in her life instead of everything going hay wire. From that, it goes to the Principal's office where her and her best friend are getting in trouble for sabotaging a play.
I mean that is so cliche and original. I've searched through book after book seeing how they did theirs and just end up getting more paranoid. What I am asking is that if someone would please help get out from behind this bollard. Just a suggestion or something that can make it a little less stereotypical! PLEASE!!
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