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NEW Poem Idea based off I'm Not Okay MCR?



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Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:24 pm
SakuraFallsSweetly♥ says...



So I was gonna do a short poem in Dramatic poetry based on the I'm Not Okay song and music video by My Chemical Romance. What do you think? Yes? No? I have it all planned out I think it would be pretty cool.
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Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:03 pm
Talulahbelle says...



Oh Yeah! I think it would be smashing! That video and and song is so poetic in itself, it makes me wish that I was a poet! Go ahead and please please pm it to me!
:mrgreen: - see this smiley? Its green with my envy!...but also really excited by your idea! (sorry, I've had WAY too much caffine)
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Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:46 pm
Sureal says...



Just write it. Worst case scenario: you get practice at writing.
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It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien