Ok, a while back I posted a storyline that seemed well liked among people but I changed a few major details and I wanted to go over them with you guys and see if you like them and maybe I can come up with some more changes to the story inspired by you all.
The story is going to be basically 2 in 1. I know that might not make sense but let me explain. Avery is a 17 year old girl who is very quite, and kept to herself. She's beautiful although she doesn't buy in to high school all that much. Her passion is writing and that's what she's known for. In English class, for her senior year, theirs only one assignment for the whole year and that is to write a novel. Her teacher pairs people up and she happens to get Corey McDaniels. He is the typical overly confident, arrogant, shallow high school football player. They get into fights and then agree that Avery will write the book and Corey will be quite the rest of the year. About mid-way through the year, Avery allows Corey to read over the rough draft of the first half of the book and is amazed by the quality and realness of the story.
You see, Avery's story is about a girl who's mother died that summer. The father of this girl becomes a complete alocholic and when he is drunk, he finds ways to blame her mother's death on her. Along with emotional abuse, he also beats her. The girl eventually falls in love with another boy and tries to hide what happened because she believes that she did kill her mom. In the end of the book, The girl is talking to her boyfriend on the phone whenever her father storms in the yell/beat her. The boy hears and drives over there as fast as possible and walks in in the middle of their fight. Dad pulls out a gun and tries to shoot him but the girl jumps in front of the bullet. [the end is left to interpet]
After Corey reads the first half of the story, he joins in writing. [so he hasn't figured out the ending yet] They get along really well and a love starts to blossom between them. After every so many chapters, you'll get to read the chapters Avery & Corey wrote. When the story starts to unfold, Corey finds out that the story is really Avery's story when he's on the phone with her and her father comes in and starts yelling and beating her. The rest you have heard. But at the very end, when she's shot she tells him to "finish the story" and then i don't know if I should add a last final chapter of Avery's story or leave it be and let people wonder what he wrote? I think that good writing allows room for interpetation ,but I don't know. What do you think?
I know I basically just told you the story ha, but I don't care I'm sure a lot of things will change before I start writing.
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