I'm undergoing a major rewrite of my main villain's character, and it's really whupping me.
At first he was the intelligent, insane, aggressive, sarcastic monster that people really enjoyed when they read him. But eventually I realized just how stereotypical and static he was, and decided to rewrite him. Now I'm making him just as intelligent and sarcastic, but now his insanity manifests itself as a 'coldness' in his brain that takes control of him in combat or when he is enraged, deadening emotion and moral consideration. Any tips on writing this? Should I include a snippet to demonstrate what I'm talking about? It's a bit confusing, I know.
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