The basic premise: Chuck is a young god sent to Earth to do a research mission. If he succeeds in this mission, he will be granted the powers of an adult god. All is dandy until a secret is discovered, and Chuck's mission takes on a whole new dimension. Meanwhile, high school drama ensues.
The characters:
Ashton is the main character. Chuck has chosen him to help with his work. He is often sarcastic and is not good at paying attention to things. He is also a bit of an outcast.
Chuck is innocent and naive. To avoid turning him into a Mary Sue, I'm making him socially awkward and he has difficulty holding a conversation with people.
Ursula is from the popular clique, and she is constantly in-and-out with her frenemies. She is rather matter-of-fact.
I'm having trouble with the antagonist here-she only has two scenes, both of which portray her as the Uberbitch from Bitchenville, Bitchland Hence she is a very poorly-developed villain. I'm trying to change that. What should I do with her?
So what do you think? How would you go about writing this idea? Any suggestions are welcome!
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