Young Writers Society

Hi,

I have attached a link to this post with the current version of my children's e-book entitled "The Great Fomblor" written for children under 8.

I am simply looking for some feedback, so take out your imagination caps and enter The Great Fomblor's Universe!!!

Also, if you have kids of your own it would be great if you could read it to them and post their responses.

http://www.thegreatfomblor.moonfruit.com/#

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